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On Tue, 27 Jan 2009 14:52:18 -0500, elanders <elanders@zoomtown.com
To give you an idea what you're in store for, here's a cool quote:
"I wake at jarr," she said imperturbably, showing six fingers.
Yep -- "imperturbably."
I think Zeborah got...
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My god ....
Coveted north corner ...book on the desk and frightened.
"bloodcurdling scream ...
B.scott@csuohio.edu
Does this twit intend to "crit" everyone's writing on this newsgroup?
Not that I care - he's inferior to my writing.
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On Tue, 27 Jan 2009 01:13:41 -0500, elanders <elanders@zoomtown.com
This is from one of Alma's books:
The first hint of serious trouble came, as trouble always does, unlooked
for, stealthily, catching everyone by surprise. It was the day that...
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Actually compare this kind of crap to my writing?
You people serious ...?
EG
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Riclanders Dot Com;elanders@zoomtown.com
Here's my response to Alma to my comments about the
period at least suggests historical ignorance ....
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Hey, my name is Joyeux (its french) aka JoyMcD I joined on the 18th and have posted 2
poems and 1 novel (realistic)
I love to read and write. My favorite type of Genre is Fiction. I love to read and write anything that is fiction. I hate reading and writing...
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I think that a lot of myWelcome! I hope you enjoy your stay as much as I do! to , Joy!
My, you are quite a figure
Jokes older poems are....
Thanks for the crits on my work as well.
To reading your stuff and critting it.
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Hi, all. I've been lurking here in the poetry forum for a month or two and today thought that it's about time for me to post. I'm a longtime member here at AW, although my post count doesn't really reflect that fact. I've been writing poetry most of my...
Started by RaineeRose on
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by 7 people.
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I offered a crit on one recent poem yesterday and plan....
I've been going through the crit section these past few days, reading through the poems and comments.
I appreciate the comments about critting.
Thanks, Blarg.
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Abandoned (1st revision)
Her son was found in the hospital
car park, swaddled in pink
and cradled in a cardboard box
A year has passed since
in a booze fuelled rage,
her father battered
her mother -- a rag doll
slumped on the kitchen floor.
Griefs talons...
Started by Eisa on
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by 4 people.
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Especially....
I forgot to write in my remembered that I han't posted my 1st revision -- so here it is!
Snow (IMG: http meaning that link to the core of the poem.
I remembered it after 2 years and finally got round to writing about it .
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This first one is based off a book series I read. Please note that all my poetry is free verse. There is no real pattern, except for the organization.
Tooth and Claw,
Magick and Blade.
A Rider and his Dragon,
That fate forbade.
The Dragon, she flies.
...
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Hopefully my thoughts....
The fourth it.
Probably a bit nitpicky but it came to my mind at any rate.
On the crit side of things, I feel it could be slightly improved by showing through felt just a bit odd.
Summary of the two as well.
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On Tue, 09 Jun 2009 12:34:53 -0700, Ben Crowell <crowell09@lightSPAMandISmatterEVIL.com
This is the opening of a 7500-word SF story. Any comments would be
much appreciated. If anyone is interested enough after reading the
opening to want to crit...
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[...]
Over....
Otherwise, I would that it's a
bit opaque.
Bill On Tue, 09 Jun 2009 15;crowel...@lightSPAMandISmatterEVIL.com
I'd like to crit but I have taken a vow.
Comments yet, but would be delighted to crit,
if you'll have me again.
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On Tue, 9 Dec 2008 17:39:09 -0600, "philo" <philo@privacy.net
The judge spoke very well.
With perfect enunciation I could hear him pronouncing,
very long sentences.
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Rather than....
Anyway I just searched my archives and found the so called poem
as it was originally published "I don't my ass from a poem" types appear to think encouraging words
are a substitute for reality "pronouncing".
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Listen to my story
the rhyming not so hot
hopefully Alice won't send
this to The Coffee Shop.
Its about some of the critics
that only take a glance
then their fingers run off
I never stood a chance
you know they never read it
oh maybe a few words
and ...
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by 6 people.
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Why, because whilst I'm critting someone else I am learning stuff, and....
I wouldn't know a well written poem if it was stuck under my nose in the slightest that I crit a LOT more .
That is the height of my expertise.
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Just when you thought poetry might take a rest...
along comes the
2012 AW February Poetry Contest!
Read all about it:
Quote: : Hey folks! I am pleased to announce February's poetry contest:
DREAMS, VISIONS, OR NIGHTMARES
What's It About?
Write a poem ...
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by 3 people.
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Perhaps that will inspire you to enter!
I just received another submission! Thank... .
Time to write poems!) Indeed! Have you looked at the prizes? You should! See my post in the poetry forum (link in my sig line) for the current list.
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