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Ok, not quite critical but take a look, anyway..
I've noticed that Lori's popped into a couple of threads to remind us that those particular ones are for critting and the submissions were going considerably off track.
She is right.
I am as guilty as anyone...
Started by Jox on
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by 6 people.
Answer Snippets (Read the full thread at mosaicmusings):
I am to poetic forms matter....
I spend, if it's in a crit forum, she may not thank you for pointing my nose in that direction.
Is not to my taste and therefore I would rather leave the critting to people who can enjoy the piece.
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Hi everyone,
I have been reading with great interest the comments on what type of critique various members would ideally like to receive, which gives valuable insight for all of us learning this process.
Quote: Critting work is almost as much of an art...
Started by Toumai on
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by 6 people.
Answer Snippets (Read the full thread at mosaicmusings):
I think my thing is this - you can write continue to crit....
I am humbled by any crit and appreciate people's efforts, thought, skill and time, based on a haiku and label it as a poem, not a haiku.
Of times on my version.
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On Tue, 27 Jan 2009 14:52:18 -0500, elanders <elanders@zoomtown.com
To give you an idea what you're in store for, here's a cool quote:
"I wake at jarr," she said imperturbably, showing six fingers.
Yep -- "imperturbably."
I think Zeborah got...
Started by elanders on
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by 27 people.
Answer Snippets (Read the full thread at omgili):
My god ....
Coveted north corner ...book on the desk and frightened.
"bloodcurdling scream ...
B.scott@csuohio.edu
Does this twit intend to "crit" everyone's writing on this newsgroup?
Not that I care - he's inferior to my writing.
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Hi all,
Just a quick note to everyone (please do respond) about the posting of poems for crit and the responses.
It may be just my misconception but I think I detect fairly recent trend for members to put poems out for crit, receive substantial crit then...
Started by Jox on
, 20 posts
by 7 people.
Answer Snippets (Read the full thread at mosaicmusings):
By receiving crit, critting other poems and prose and receiving good on a ....
How do I know just how much I have benefited .
If I offer a crit, especially if it is my interpretation on a poem and get no feedback.
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On Tue, 27 Jan 2009 01:13:41 -0500, elanders <elanders@zoomtown.com
This is from one of Alma's books:
The first hint of serious trouble came, as trouble always does, unlooked
for, stealthily, catching everyone by surprise. It was the day that...
Started by elanders on
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by 28 people.
Answer Snippets (Read the full thread at omgili):
Actually compare this kind of crap to my writing?
You people serious ...?
EG
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Riclanders Dot Com;elanders@zoomtown.com
Here's my response to Alma to my comments about the
period at least suggests historical ignorance ....
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I've Never Critiqued Before
A lot of people dont particularly want to critique the poems of others. They begin to do so, however, as a matter of necessity. They want to know if they are any good as a poet, and want to post a poem to a critique forum. ...
Started by Cleo_Serapis on
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by 4 people.
Answer Snippets (Read the full thread at mosaicmusings):
Though long defunct, P.O.E.M.S. Place was inhabited by some.
Of conversation at my former poetic home.
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I've Never Critiqued Before
A lot of people dont particularly want to critique the poems of others. They begin to do so, however, as a matter of necessity. They want to know if they are any good as a poet, and want to post a poem to a critique forum. ...
Started by Cleo_Serapis on
, 2 posts
by 2 people.
Answer Snippets (Read the full thread at mosaicmusings):
Cheers, ron jgd.
I'll be watching for your postings.
Dear NDG,
Nice to see your name again and to read your excellent advice and especially your poetry .
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I've Never Critiqued Before
A lot of people dont particularly want to critique the poems of others. They begin to do so, however, as a matter of necessity. They want to know if they are any good as a poet, and want to post a poem to a critique forum. ...
Started by Cleo_Serapis on
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by 1 people.
Answer Snippets (Read the full thread at mosaicmusings):
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I nicked this from a different thread and thought it would be a good topic to discuss:
Quote: : Fair enough, but there is a difference which is very hard for some poets to see between "your poem sucks" and "you suck." While it might be rudely phrased,...
Started by Neonurotic on
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by 11 people.
Answer Snippets (Read the full thread at literotica):
In my own case, I admitted a crit-
ic base their comments on the fact my
poems come without images?
Or argue that my poems are less ....
La-
canian rats in form, and that the poem
has a 'Lacanian' content.
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Hi All,
I've set up this thread to illustrate my concept of Toumaing.
When a piece of prose is highly poetic it may, actually, work much better as a good or very good poem. I've suggested this to a couple of people but I started with a piece by Toumai...
Started by Jox on
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by 2 people.
Answer Snippets (Read the full thread at mosaicmusings):
I could see the familiar lines of the room, and what in truth I could not see my....
Until my mother lit the candle my eyes were adjusted to the gloom.
Get Writing):
ENCROACHING DARKNESS
Darkness only becomes absolute when there is light .
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